The Sweetest Thing (by request)
Its been a week since (ichiban's name) last saw you. He couldn't get his mind off you that it's already affecting his work, driving him crazy. Unable to take the maddening thoughts in his head, (ichiban's name) went to your apartment, banging loudly on the door.
" (your name), open the door onegai!" He called out loudly.
No answer.
" (your name), (your name) open the door onegai!!!" he kept yelling.
Still no answer.
"I think i love you..." his voice faltered, almost choking on the words
One of the neighbors nextdoor came out, "Are! Can't you tell (your name)'s not there?! It's late already! Let us sleep!!!"
"Sumimasen.." (ichiban's name) said as the neighboor went back into their apartment. Thoughts were running trough his head. What if she left already? What if he'd never see her again? He slumped into a heap in the hallway, frustrated and hurt. Wanting so much to see (your name) again and to take you into his arms even just for one last time. He was on the brink of tears when (ichiban's name) got a tap on his shoulder.
" Anou~ sumimasen..." that unmistakably sweet voice he had loved to hear. (ichiban's name) looked up to a puzzled (your name). You were in your work clothes, carrying a plastic bag from the conbini nearby. "Ne, (ichiban's name)-kun...what are you doing here? Its late already..." Her eyes full of concern since you knew he had to wake up really early everyday for work. He stood up and in one quick movement held you in his arms.
"I think I'm in love with you, (your name)" he said pulling away just enough to look into your pretty eyes before taking your lips with his. Tenderly at first, then becomeing more earnest as his hands roamed the length of your back before grabbing your butt and grinding his hips against yours, letting you feel his erection, wanting nothing more than anything to love you. To feel your skin on his. You wanted naught but the same thing, dropping the bag of groceries and letting your hands run along his arms then burying them in his hair. Letting out a soft moan, you pushed him lightly," I think we'd better go inside..." You took his hand, picked up your groceries and went into the apartment. Setting down the plastic bag on the counter before leading him to your bedroom, continuing your kiss as it became urgent. (ichiban's name), laid you on the bed, his eyes asking if it was alright for him to go on, he knew even if you said no, he'd not be able to leave you now. His body loomed closer over you, you raised yourself on your elbows to kiss him in response, a hand rested on his nape as you laid back down. Letting his full weight to fall on you. His lips smiled in the kiss, getting the response he had hoped for he unbuttoned your blouse and yours pulled his shirt over his head. letting your hands touch his toned chest and hard abs lightly. To say that his body was on fire with every move of your fingers wasn't enough to describe how he felt.
"Wait.." you whispered as you pushed him onto his back, straddling him, and deftly opened his fly and unzipped his fly and freed his hard on from the constricting boxers. (ichiban's name) gasped aloud then helped you take his jeans off, your hands gripped him firmly. Your thumb playing with the sensitive head while the other moved up and down his length. His breathing became ragged as you hastened you movements. (ichiban's name) bit his lower lip so as to muffle an agonizing moan of pleasure as you did so. He then reached down to squeeze your arm to stop you from going any further and pulled you closer up to him. Still kneeling astride him, he unhooked your wraparound skirt and threw it aside. You took off your bra as his eyes took in your body, his hands caressed your smooth thighs saying, "you're so beautiful, (your name)". He then undid the ribbons of your g-string and threw it near the skirt. His hand moved from your thigh and slid two fingers into your moist heat. A llittle gasp escaped your lips as he sat up and put an arm round your waist to support you before licking and sucking tenderly on your twin peaks.
Your soft moans echoed in the room, "(ichiban's name)..."
Before you knew what was happening, he lowered you into his shaft slowly.
"(your name)...you feel so good...uuhhhnn.." (ichiban's name) muttered softly agains your skin.
"Ohgod! ahhhh...(ichiban's name)..."you gasped. shocked at how big he was as he slipped inside you till he filled you to the very core. His lips found yours again, your tongues danced then you began to sway to and fro. Slowly at first, both hungry for the passion that engulfed you. He loves you, at least that's what he said. It didn't really matter to you, what mattered was what you're sharing. Your thrusts became frenzied as the pent-up heat burst into flames, consuming both of you in the sweetest thing your could ever imagine. You held each other as the tiny shudders subsided. His lips pressed onto yours gently. A long soulful one before parting from yours to say, "Please don't leave me, (your name). Looking into his sincere brown eyes,"I've loved you long before this day. Before you even knew I existed, (ichiban's name)"
He could barely beleive it but he was happy. He laid both of you down on the pillows, his ams not letting you go. His eyes searched you face for the truth, he understood.
"I don't care that you're a fan" (ichiban's name) murmured into your hair. "just stay with me.."
You closed your eyes unable to believe this was happning.
"Now i'm sure...I love you, (your name)" he whispered into your ears as you drifted off to sleep.
~end~
Comments
*fans self* now that was what i like to call HOT! ^_~ though i think i almost cried at the beginning cuz he thought she was really gone. T_T
great job as usual! this cheered me up a lot. ^____^
hi!! I visited your vox, la lang.
^^THAT is.. graphic. haha.
I can't believe I am going to mass in 30 minutes. The images are still pretty vivid to me!! Lagot. hehe.
well done! :)
jamie-chan~
at last! i finally read the complete version of this! ^____^
i really like the story and the lines at the end part *hearts*
nice job! ;)
*hides behind shosuki* you can blame him...
after i almost lost him..he...we...ugh..*blushes*
made-up..i guess..*blushes more*
~can i die now girl? sobra ka naman...
*hides*
well jamie-chan, if you still remember what we've talked about 3 weeks ago sa text...
for me, hindi pa rin siya porn XD cuz they're just sharing their passion for love... unlike in porn... i guess you know what i mean jamie-chan :p
daijoubu ^___^
you know me naman, i'm one of your avid fans ne! XD
miss you~ *hugs*
~blushes~
mou...ur my imouto...♥~hugs~
i miss you too
mou..that's not what i meant...i just got surprised...~hugs~
thanks for the comment btw...
*blushes*
hmm....i don't have forums that's why i have time here...
*HAWT* well..what more can i say ;) you're really a fantastic fanfic writer ^^
Ah... souka! Well, you could always join my fanfiction forum and post there too. *giggles*
mou...i'll try to join..
but i'm really shy about my work...
*fiddles with hem of jacket*
I hope I did not offend you!!
It really well written and it's not porn, it's L♥Ve :)
kii-yaaaahh!
no its just..i'm quite concerned if it's porn already..please do tell me...
i don't want it to be like that ne..but..
doumo arigatou...happy that you liked it...
*hides behind shosuki*
excited to read more from yah!
ureshii na..>_<
well..hikari has given me an idea again..*giggles*
i have a lot in store well...about 2 i haven't posted yet...