Fanfic: Afterglow...
this started as something to comfort a good friend of mine...she was feeling low and i thought i'd make her a fanfic where she would be cuddled by her ichiban but then she wanted more so i just had to continue and make it into a sort-of a bed scene...its not for minors so please if you're not ready for this just dont click the link...any how....i forwarded this in a series of SMSes at one per day...the response to it was nice and i just wanted to share it with minna... i did it in a way where you can copy it and fill in the blanks with your name and the name of your ichiban or whoever you love...as long as he's a man...hehehe...
so here goes nothing....
Lying in bed waiting for sleep to come to you. (ichiban's name) turns on his side facing you. "(your name)", he says, reaching out to take your arm and wrap it around him. He draws you near, you smile and snuggle up under his chin. He breathes in your hair, kisses your forehead...you hear his heartbeat and his breathing...he wants to say something but is hesitating. You wonder what it is. (ichiban's name) isn't usually like this. He takes a deep breath, you brace yourself for what he's about to say.
"Don't ever leave my (your name)" he pleads, the break in his voice audible as he strokes your hair lovingly. Then caressing your cheek and lifting your chin up to meet his gaze, searching for words but couldn't grasp them. (ichiban's name) pulls you nearer. Your lips touch, tenderly speaking what your hearts longed to say. The kiss deepened, the burning hunger awakened. Your hands now buried in his hair. His hands moving down the length of your back both hoping for the moment to never end. His hands continues down to your hips to your smooth thighs, taking one and wrapping it over his hip.
In between jagged breaths he stops his course, "(your name), I-..." Yor hand slipped fron his hair to his lips to stop his protest. You knew what he wanted and you wanted it too. It may be the craziest thing you've ever done but here he is, longing for you as you've yearned for him. "(ichiban's name), I love you that's all the matters to me" At that, the same hand that touched his lips traced a trail down, down, down and played with the corners of his boxers before plunging within.
"(your name)!!" (ichiban's name) gasped followed by a low groan escaped his lips, "I love you"
You giggled, "You'd better!!"
"And I will..." he smiled at you mischievously, raising himself from the bed. He bent down tasting your lips again, the wanting and waiting persisted. His lips grazed you jawline to your neck nuzzling the sensuous skin. Taking in your scent, the sensation almost sending over the edge, he stopped only to peel off your nightgown. His muscles tensed at the sight of you, it's the first time (ichiban's name) saw all of you. He drank it all in, trying to control himself.
" I don't want you to think that I'm forcing you...," his voice thick with emotion the question seen on his face.
"No, you're all I've ever wanted, (ichiban's name)." Pulling at the corner of his shirt and taking it up and over his head. You then took off the boxers that held him at bay thus far ad pulled hi into your arms. Skin to skin. Touching. Teasing. Hearts beat faster then he pulls away and reaches for the drawer beside the bed. You wait in anticipation. A condom. You giggled as (ichiban's name) grinned at you. Taking it from his hands, you deftly slid it on him. Pulling it down ever so slowly. He moaned, unable to take the pleasure pain. (Ichiban's name) takes your hands away from him and takes you hands in his as he slipped inside you. Your world seemed to blur. All that mattered was being one. You shifted, holding each other tight. THe passion. The desire. The fire that burned consumed both of you as it peaked to a crescendo and burst into a myriad of blissful colors. Both of you calling out each other's name til the final delicious tremors subsided.
(Ichiban's name) laid spent in your arms. Your breathing just as ragged as his. You listened to his hearbeat slowing its pace, stroking his damp hair.
"I love you,(ichiban's name)" you whispered softly.
He kisses you fully on the lips. That same soulful kiss that started all of this, then pulled away, "Don't you ever leave me (your name), promise me. I'd die without you." You can see his eyes pleading you.
"I'll never let you go, I promise."
THen sleep found the both of you in the afterglow.
hope minna liked it...please do credit so others can get it here...>_<
i'm always happy to share..
douzo yoroshiku...
Comments
um, i think the temperature just rose quite a bit in here. *diiiieeeeeeesss*
i hope you know how much i enjoyed reading that and inserting Sho's name in the blanks. hahahaha!! ^_~ thanks so much for this! it's really well written! *hugs*
geez! even it's raining, i still feel "hot" XD
after reading your fanfics, i can say that i'm your fan now ;) you're so good! keep it up! ^___^
btw, thank you for adding me here in vox ^___^ and i'm just curious, is that sho in your banner? XD
hehe...oh..you're also from the philippines ne?!
ahhh..doumo arigatou for the compliment..hai that's my shosuki...my main inspiration*blushes profusely*
it was made by my friend here in vox...well one fof my imouto here...
that's a scan from myojo august...its inspired me to write another fic honestly...
*blushes and melts in sho's bare arms*
yupyup :) i'm from philippines ^___^
really? is that sho???? omg! he's so..... hot.. hot.. hot... HOT in that pic!!!!!! *melts*
thank you for telling me *hugs*
ang galing galing naman!! wahaha..
oo si shosuki ko yan...ahhh..hot is an understatement...~dies~
mah...ok lang yan..go lang nang go!!! kekeke...
~hugs back~
oo, sobrang nakaka- waaaaaaaaaaaaah! XD and i'm so happy na ang dami nagmamahal kay sho ^__^ (sho is also my ichiban :p so sana wag kang magalit sa akin ^^;;)
may i know what year siya in-issue? :p
i never hate fangirls...unless you're a claimer...i hate claimers..gomen ne...
ahh..yan? myojo aug...oorder pa lang kami...heaven deshou?!
don't worry ne, i'm not a claimer XD
and yeah, sobrang heaven *floats*
thank you talaga ha ^___^
ei want to join us sa tanjoubi ni jun?!
it will be on the 30th or aug...starts at 4pm...sa UP vill...
if you say tanjoubi, birthday celebration? :) (sorry, d pa ako ganun kagaling sa japanese ^^;)
sige, titignan ko muna kasi i'm not yet sure sa magiging sched ko for next term.. if i'm free well why not d ba? :)
thanks talaga ^__^ btw, what's your name pala? :)
i'll send you my mobile # so you could text me if you could join us ne...its a saturday naman eh...
oh okay ^___^
cgecge, i'll try talaga makapunta para din naman makita ko rin kayo in person ^__^